Critique Me 2012

[zombie fish]

By the way. today is the day? M?

[scifinic]

Originally Posted by zombie fish

well not sure if I'm really happy with the end result on this, i know that the hair is just rubbish. what do you guys/gals think of this. I got a friend that wants me to tattoo this on them.

I'm liking it Zombie Fish but how about some flourishes in the background behind the face to counterbalance the ones in the foreground?

[M]

Originally Posted by zombie fish

you see, that's what I get for trying to do a custom piece so soon. lol
basically yea the only reason that the filigree was that dark was so you can tell that the girl is behind it. but I will try and make her darker, If I mess up its okay cause its just a sketch right now.

It's not a bad piece at all! I really like the combination of a portrait and filigree Think it'll look good if it gets a bit darker - hope I don't get you to screw it up now :P
Have you done more tattoos lately?

Originally Posted by zombie fish

By the way. today is the day? M?

Yeah well, tomorrow (Danish time) WAS the day! I'd just finished a last-minute drawing and put everything together in my portfolio, when the tattoo artist resceduled the appointment to next week.. So, now I have even more time to add things to my portfolio! Really hope he doesn't cancel next time as well, or hire someone else before he sees my portfolio!

[zombie fish]

Originally Posted by M

It's not a bad piece at all! I really like the combination of a portrait and filigree Think it'll look good if it gets a bit darker - hope I don't get you to screw it up now :P
Have you done more tattoos lately?


Yeah well, tomorrow (Danish time) WAS the day! I'd just finished a last-minute drawing and put everything together in my portfolio, when the tattoo artist resceduled the appointment to next week.. So, now I have even more time to add things to my portfolio! Really hope he doesn't cancel next time as well, or hire someone else before he sees my portfolio!

awwwww, and more time to feel the butterflies in the stomach. everything will go to well, you will see. And I get to do another tattoo this weekend of a chaos cross I think? did not get a chance to tattoo last week because I went to my best friend's wedding. took the weekend off. but my mentor wants me to be tattooing at least once a week. I will post the next tattoo.

[M]

Originally Posted by zombie fish

awwwww, and more time to feel the butterflies in the stomach. everything will go to well, you will see. And I get to do another tattoo this weekend of a chaos cross I think? did not get a chance to tattoo last week because I went to my best friend's wedding. took the weekend off. but my mentor wants me to be tattooing at least once a week. I will post the next tattoo.

Yeah, definitely more time to feel the butterflies in my stomach! Oh well, now they have some time to settle down a bit, before they'll fly again :P

A chaos cross sounds like a tough one to do - all those straight lines! Hope it goes well, and look forward to see it

[scifinic]

Originally Posted by M

Yeah, definitely more time to feel the butterflies in my stomach! Oh well, now they have some time to settle down a bit, before they'll fly again :P

A chaos cross sounds like a tough one to do - all those straight lines! Hope it goes well, and look forward to see it

I know how you are feeling M, I've got knots in my stomach waiting to see if I've got my apprenticeship. I'm sure you'll be fine

[M]

When will you know, Scifinic? Fingers crossed for both of us!

[zombie fish]

am just glad that there is going to be more apprentices in this thread. wooohhhoooo. it comes to show that it can happen.
and yes M, kind of worried about all those straight lines. hoping all goes well.

[scifinic]

Originally Posted by zombie fish

am just glad that there is going to be more apprentices in this thread. wooohhhoooo. it comes to show that it can happen.
and yes M, kind of worried about all those straight lines. hoping all goes well.

You'll be fine, your lettering looked perfect, your lines were neat

[zombie fish]

Originally Posted by scifinic

You'll be fine, your lettering looked perfect, your lines were neat

Thank you