Old 11-08-2012, 09:22 PM   #1811
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Really pretty card! And what a cute son your mum has, bet she loved it
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looks brilliant nice bright colours, beutiful shading , your mums gnna be happy to recieve this piece of art =]
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Nice, I really like hand made birthday cards.
Thank you all! Too kind!

I think she liked it, my Mums hard to read haha.

Enjoyed making it, kind of my first experience of working to a deadline with art as well in a sense ha, i need to work on my scissor skills though hehe.
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Old 12-08-2012, 12:02 AM   #1812
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just got this done tonight, thought i'd try doing a red rose, wish i'd done it something stranger now haha, nice to go for traditional every now and then though, has made me realise that i need more shades of red

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Old 12-08-2012, 12:25 AM   #1813
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I think the praying hands looks nice, would be great to see some finished designs though, instead of just linework

The tinkerbell has something creepy over her, I think.. But can't figure out what it is.. Her face just looks a bit evil in my eyes

Oh, and maybe you should add some more shading on the Betty Boop characters.. Like, add darker colours some places..




Really pretty card! And what a cute son your mum has, bet she loved it



Here's what I'm working at. Were supposed to be a quick practice with my prisma colours.. Oh well, here we are 5-6 hours later. Taking forever and I'm strugglin with getting a "crisp", clean line, because the pencils are sooo soft! But anyway, I'm in love with my prismas!!
what did I tell you. now I can see the details and its brilliant.
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Old 12-08-2012, 05:46 PM   #1814
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really like the Buddha drawing I'd like to see it with some bold colours in those flowers (thats my opinion any way) yeah really like your work. be nice to see them all finished and finalised. Dead good though
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Old 12-08-2012, 11:08 PM   #1815
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Nice ash really like that!

Finished this, not happy with the waves but I used too much grey and couldn't do much else!



Only realised how bad this photo is seeing it on the comp rather than my phone. There's little lines in the petals of the peony that you can't even see here. I'll upload a better one later and take this down!

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Old 14-08-2012, 07:45 AM   #1816
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Got some more done on this last night, feel I went too black and I don't like the snakes eye any other thoughts?
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Old 14-08-2012, 12:34 PM   #1817
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New drawing I finished this morning. What you think?
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Looks nice, it may just be my phone screen doesn't show it up but it looks like there could be more texture in the feathers
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Old 14-08-2012, 03:34 PM   #1819
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it does look really nice, my thing with it would be contrast, check the values on this piece. may do good to go a little darker, but it could just be the photograph quality.
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Old 14-08-2012, 03:35 PM   #1820
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Got some more done on this last night, feel I went too black and I don't like the snakes eye any other thoughts?
I really dig this piece, but you are right the snake is kind of getting lost in the background with all that black.
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