Old 19-04-2016, 09:48 PM   #1
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Hi,

I've attached a few things i've been thinking to include in my portfolio, although before I go and ask around I'd really appreciate some feedback.

I am improving all the time but it would be nice to know if i'm going in the right direction.

Thanks!

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Old 19-04-2016, 09:51 PM   #2
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More black.
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Old 19-04-2016, 09:55 PM   #3
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You mean around the outside of the drawings?
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You defiantly need more black, the first two images have very little if any black or shading. Adding more black will add more depth to the images.
Also keep an eye on proportions, for instance the koi tail is far too fat and yoda is all off.

But keep practicing and you will get there good luck
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